what do you think of the latest extract of my book?
This is the latest extract from the first draft of my book – I have many posts on here – A little background on this post. They are in a nightclub, Hannah is the main characters ex-girlfriend. Lexi is the girl he is falling for and she for him but she is also Hannah’s best friend)
I cant help but feel a little jealous. Even though I’m dancing with a hot girl I find myself keeping an eye on them as I dance with this girl. I start making out with this girl as Hannah and Lexi disappear into the crowd with the guys they are with. I take the girl I’m with into the toilets with me, we both hit a few lines of coke, and end up having shameless drug endorsed sex. It’s the first time I have done this since going through my darkness.
Going back out, I spot Ryan who’s also charged on coke. We make our way around the club, we see KC and Jackson talking to a group of girls. We carry on past them, Lisa and her friend have found their way to a couch still making out. Meeting up with Shaun and Amy, the four of us drink some more.
I see Hannah running through the club frantically looking for us, bobbing her head up at down – she finally spots us. Running over, panicked she tells us a group of guys are hassling Lexi outside.
As soon as I here this I charge outside. Still charged off the coke, I flip like a light switch, from happy to fighting mode. Parting the crowd like Moses parting the red sea everybody runs out behind me.
I see a group of 6 or 7 guys hassling Lexi. She is standing up for herself, giving as good as is she getting. Being instantly concerned for her, I jump in without a thought. Launching myself into them, swinging at anybody in sight. At first I try and take them all on my self. The rest of the group join in. I connect with a few punches, the whole group is fighting them including the girls. Even Lexi throws a few mean left hooks, connecting with one she knocks one of the guys out cold. Punches are getting thrown all over the place, blood is spurting around me some of it my own.
Realising they are worse for wear they start to run off. We chase them as we are all still charged, but they hobble into a car and drive off.
My pulse is racing the adrenaline has fully kicked in. I see Lexi as I turn round she gives me a hug, I ask her if she is ok, she nods her head, holding onto me tight. Nobody really pays attention to the hug, everybody just glad she is ok, but the hug means so much to me.
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I think it’s good, it’s written in a sort of choppy way that I can’t really explain but it makes nice reading. It also reminds me of Trainspotting a bit.
Bill was born in Cork in 1926, moving to Cahir and returning in later years, getting married in 1944, Bill documents what it was like to grow up, work and live in these times in Ireland. Throughout his lifetime he grappled with the path he was guided through, leading to his healing and psychic experiences. In the winter of his days, Bill is now 83 years of age, Bill is spiritually strong, but his physical body is wearing out and he has difficulty with vision, walking and requires frequent hospitalisation. He is overwhelmed by the messages of love and prayers which come from all quarters of the country and indeed much further afield. Please be aware that Bill is unable to answer all your emails and letters as it is simply too much for him. Part of the job Bill wanted to fulfill before he departed this world, was to write down his story as it is. It may help you or it may not but this in reality is the last great task which we can ask Bill to complete at this time in his life. With every best wish and blessing to each of you.
Lexi–POV
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