Comments on: I need some honest opinions, please?

By: Melissa P

Melissa P — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 10:47:59 +0000

The paper is informative and interesting, although there are typos that should be fixed. I suggest that you re-read carefully to check the grammar and spelling. One additional item--I noticed that you did not include citations or a bibliography. In general, when writing a paper, it is abolutely critical to cite your sources to prevent charges of plagiarism. Obviously you have done some reading and research in order to write this paper, and you need to include your sources.
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By: science geek

science geek — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 10:16:59 +0000

It's a bit redundant in some places and there are dozens of grammatical errors (mostly comma and semicolon usage errors). The information is good and the overall organization is solid. As it currently is, I would give you a B, but you could make it a better read if you rewrite it. Watch for places where you repeat previous lines and be a little more careful with your use of commas and semicolons.
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By: koki83

koki83 — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 10:00:59 +0000

its beautiful and its fun to read one more fact lions cubs stay with the mother for tow years
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By: cassy

cassy — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 09:49:59 +0000

Nicley typed out, but there is 1 fact left out re lions.
If a new Male Lion comes into another prides terrority, the leader of that pride and intruder will fight, if the orginal male leader looses and the new 1 wins, and if there are cubs, he will kill the cubs , so that the lioness will come into season again and he then ensures he as offspring. Cats also do this.
HTH.
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By: RdJa

RdJa — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 09:07:59 +0000

Your paper is very well organized and very imformative. I learned many new things from this paper. I bet with all the different fonts and pictures your paper has good eye appeal also.

Awesome work. You deserve an "A". Keep up the good work!!!
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By: Renaissance Man

Renaissance Man — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 08:43:59 +0000

It's good as far as it goes. But I think you ought to include something on cheetahs.
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By: Stunt_Gem

Stunt_Gem — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 08:13:59 +0000

That sucks...
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